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PLEASE READ AND COMMENT, this one's very dear to me.

 
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xeroiv
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2004 10:52 pm    Post subject: PLEASE READ AND COMMENT, this one's very dear to me.

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Out of Reach

Disappearing in the bliss,
I'm trying to see through the fog,
Once I reach the end of this,
I find nothing but a black abyss,
The grey void's growing bigger, today.

Dig a hole inside of me,
Try to hide from the nothing in you,
If only I could find the way,
To the star that points me home,
Maybe then I'll live to see another day.

I have hope that a better time exist,
I'm going to gather a thousand angels,
They'll bring my life back, revive me inside,
I'm going to collect a thousand muse,
They'll assist me, in what I wanna be,
They'll lift me up, to where I wish to be.

I felt another knife digging into me,
No cure for my depression today,
I can see a little bit of light in me,
But far too dim to be followed,
The darkness has me, the light can't suspend me.

Dig a hole inside of me,
Try to hide from the nothing in you,
If only I could find the way,
To the star that points me home,
Maybe then I'll live to see another day.

I have hope that a better time exist,
I'm going to gather a thousand angels,
They'll bring my life back, revive me inside,
I'm going to collect a thousand muse,
They'll assist me, in what I wanna be,
They'll lift me up, to where I wish to be.

I see the better future for me, ( too far out of reach )
I'm going to gather a thousand angels, ( too far out of reach )
I'm going to collect a thousand muse, ( too far out of reach )
They'll assist me, in what I wanna be, ( too far out of reach )
They'll lift me up, to where I wish to be. ( too far out of reach )
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"I once had a gray in me that created a great unwanted apathy,
You once had a red in you that caused you to have great sympathy for me,
I turned away, when I should have accepted, I backed away, wishing to go away,
I went away, I stayed away, for far to long, no coming back now, I guess,
I’ll just fade away…" Daggered Reality, by: me

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Lythinin
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Posts: 128
Location: Middle Earth

PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 4:21 pm    Post subject:

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Wow......that is a VERY nice poem. I really like how vivid it is. Even if it seems sad. It has alot of feeling behind it. Keep up the good work!

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BonlainyT
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2004 10:53 pm    Post subject:

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Nice job Xer, glad you share these with us.
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