I can Haiku, you?

Phinneas · Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 6:35 pm Post subject:

Hehe here ya go Love, sorry it took so long to do:

Mrs. Lovelyeye Smith
Shiney oh so so shiney
My eyes cannot avert

Razz

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Lythinin · Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:12 pm Post subject:

Ok. This is just one I thought up real quickly. Not a funny one of about anyone, just a traditional Hiku. Hope you all like it!

A Forest at Night
The deep and dark Mystery
The calm of the night

That's what I thought of. Smile

If anyone would write a hiku about me I would be honoured. Very Happy

but no great need. Smile

Hope you liked my little poem.

MiiknCookies · Member Joined: 12 Dec 2004 Posts: 26

my coffee tastes odd
drive thru girl gave me wrong drink?
mocha this is not

i miss my mocha
morning coffee i need bad
all i have is this

Phinneas · Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:04 pm Post subject:

Miik!!! LOL I FEEL YOUR PAIN!!! Smile

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Brakiss · Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:41 pm Post subject:

Brakiss, Tunare's son
Say what? You need a rez WHERE!?!
Sure sucks to be you Twisted Evil

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Phinneas · Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 10:24 am Post subject:

Galremos Mini Mini
Pull that bridge Eeps Aggro! Splat!
Arlyxir perty bird

Hehe fun time last night Walkers!
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Dunnodoncare · Member Joined: 04 Nov 2004 Posts: 2

Was there ever a man from
that place, nantucket, who had
the big penis?

Ellen Degeneres show
one entertaining lesbian
needs big tits.

Way too much effort in this
counting syllables, one to
seventeen.

Lame, I know, but what the hell!

Have fun guys

Invisible.

Grubbie · Member Joined: 20 Aug 2004 Posts: 108 Location: Canada

What is Haiku
I never studied this
Is it correct?

PS - I have no idea how to do this lol, am I close?
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Phinneas · Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 10:40 am Post subject:

Haiku - A style of lyric poetry borrowed from the Japanese that typically presents an intense emotion or vivid image of nature, which, traditionally, is designed to lead to a spiritual insight. Haiku is a fixed poetic form, consisting of seventeen syllables organized into three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. Today, however, many poets vary the syllabic count in their haiku.
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Varthon · Member Joined: 31 May 2004 Posts: 269 Location: Idaho

I am getting tired
oh what a lovely creature
"you have been slain by...."
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