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Daneloire
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My workday is a little more simplistic. Woe to those who expect me to do work.
I sat quietly.
Some tool had to bother me.
Now I kick some ass. |
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Emmie
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Bonlainy is cute
But be careful with this girl
She has a wee-wee
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Daneloire
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| Posted: Sun May 23, 2004 10:23 am Post subject: |
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haha 
-Dane |
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Denee
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Lol these are good...
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Thallas
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careful is ok
but his is so minimal
it is like...absent |
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Rufuss
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Hauen
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| Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2004 11:01 pm Post subject: |
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Just for you, Rufuss...
HAIKUKIE
I love all cookies
Oreos are the best ones
Worship the cookie
(alternative last line, "Don't touch my cookies") |
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Shiloch Veneficus
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| Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 12:22 am Post subject: |
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Is it just me, or does the alternate line "Don't touch my cookies" seem like it sets a double-standard for these haikus? |
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Hauen
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| Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 2:33 am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Is it just me, or does the alternate line "Don't touch my cookies" seem like it sets a double-standard for these haikus? |
hai·ku:
n. pl. haiku, also hai·kus
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
2. A poem written in this form.
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[Japanese : hai, amusement (from Middle Chinese bij, pha·j) + ku, sentence (from Middle Chinese kuh).]
Source: The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language, Fourth Edition
Copyright © 2000 by Houghton Mifflin Company.
Published by Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.
As you can see if we were to apply the strict traditional definition we're all in violation of the rules of haiku. Since it's all in fun, and as far as I know there are no haiku police, just go with it man. Better yet, arrange the 5 syllable lines in the way you think is most appropriate for Rufuss. That was kind of my original intent, since I only know her through her cookie obsession. Well, that and I'm just too damned lazy to write three versions of Haikukie...  |
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Emmie
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| Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 3:46 am Post subject: |
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Chocolate is good
Chocolate is outrageous
Chocolate is love
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Mildane
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| Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 3:58 am Post subject: |
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This seems like some fun.
One two three four five six sev.
Does that really count?
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Mildane
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| Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 4:03 am Post subject: |
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He look like a man.
I tell you everything.
He look, he look like.
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Daneloire
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| Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 10:25 am Post subject: |
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I did not know Haiku was supposed to evoke the seasons. I guess we'll have to try again in true Japanese style.
A cricket singing,
His music is somnolent,
Like a summer breeze.
-Dane |
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Shiloch Veneficus
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| Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 10:28 am Post subject: |
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Hauen:
I wasn't really talking about the rules of haiku or anything about it's specific method.
It was more of a 'dirty old man' type thing. |
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Emmie
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