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xeroiv
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 11:40 pm    Post subject: Another poem, COMMENT, don't care if just say "kool&quo

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Shattered

I feel, happy,
The day is bright and full of hope,
I'm vibrant, today,
Will not last forever.

It's just a break,
The calming of the sea storm,
I'm wollowing in an eye of hurricane,
Soon the rain will return, the lightening will strike,
And all that seemed in peace, will break into many...

I have serenity, in my skull,
The files in my mind, sorted and maintained,
I'm sane, again,
But nevertheless, the confusion will begin.

It's just a break,
The calming of the sea storm,
I'm wollowing in an eye of hurricane,
Soon the rain will return, the lightening will strike,
And all that seemed in peace, will break into many...

I feel like a ship coming in,
But the fog's beginning to settle,
The light's to dim to follow,
The waves create dischord with the fog horn,
Then a learing shows itself, portrays a horrid image,
Senery of jagged rocks, the shore,
Then ith a sudden hault, it's over...

It's just a break,
The calming of the sea storm,
I'm wollowing in an eye of hurricane,
Soon the rain will return, the lightening will strike,
And all that seemed in peace, will break into many...

The cold grasps me,
Chokes my throat,
Trapping the air outside my body,
Blackness comes to me,
Then, then, the....

It was just a break,
The calming of the sea storm,
I went wollowing in an eye of hurricane,
Soon the rain returned, the lightening struck,
And all that seemed in piece, broke into many...pieces.

COOOOOOOMMMMMMMEEEEEEEENT PLEASEEEEE!
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You once had a red in you that caused you to have great sympathy for me,
I turned away, when I should have accepted, I backed away, wishing to go away,
I went away, I stayed away, for far to long, no coming back now, I guess,
I’ll just fade away…" Daggered Reality, by: me

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2004 11:55 am    Post subject:

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I like it Xer, and I think it can be true for most people at times.
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