Well, what'd you think? I'm not really happy with the prologue, but it's sstaying like that for now. I've got a map and stuff all drawn up, but you can't see it, so =p.
I'm sick of all the "There's this innocent boy who is something special so he has to save the world" that you read in every fantasy book. I'm going more for a hero that couldn't give two damns about the rest of the world, but he's forced to save it for his own reasons. Not a lovable guy, but hopefully you'll start to at least understand him some later.
Heelar Salvavidas...
well, I guess I'll just go by Travis now.
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